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Guilty chapter 7

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Guilty Ch. 7



"Fluttershy?" Apple jack asked knocking on her cabin door. Fluttershy hasn't came out

in days. Everyone has been getting worried.

"Fluttershy? Answer me. Come out please." Applejack pleaded.

"Go away. Please just go away.." Fluttershy begged from across the door. Everything

that happened with discord has torn her apart. Her heart ached, she had hurt him.

She didn't mean to, she don't even know how..she can't process it all in her head.

Yet she knows, she ripped hi into pieces.

Applejack sighed and rested her head on the door. She had to get her out of there.

Everyone has been trying so hard, all week, but she won't budge. The other five

have been taking turns tending to her animals.

Applejack knew that her snapping at her that day didn't help. If it weren't for Luna

answering the S.O.S letter, they would still be at the castle in the mess.

"Flutters. Please. Please come out. You have got to be hungry! Now please!"

"No! I need to be alone!" Fluttershy screamed.

"You need a friend! Allot of friends! Now open up or i'll bust the door down!"

"You wouldn't!"

"I would!"

Fluttershy then peaked open the door and looked out.

"There, i opened it."

"Good. Now come out."

Fluttershy sighed and stepped out into the sunlight. You could tell she had been crying,

and looked as if she hadn't slept in days.

"Oh. Sugar-cube. Look at ya. You look,...well..i'll be honest with ya. Horrible."

Fluttershy hung her head.

"Oh. Thanks."

"well I wasn't gonna lie to you. You know I can't"

Fluttershy smiled.

"It's okay. Your right anyways."


Discord had returned to his castle, heartbroken. He rampaged threw the doors, roaring

in anger. He felt and piercing pain in his chest. The room was spinning, his eyes

filled with tears. He couldn't stop his body from shacking. Heartbreak had gotten to him.

"What is this!?" He screamed out, clinching his chest with his claw.

This is heartbreak. It's what happens when you fall in love, with a pathetic Pegasus.

"She..she..she betray me.."

Well to be technical, you two really weren't special some ponies. So she didn't. It just feels

like she did. Still, even that is going to hurt.

Discord sobbed into his hands. Shacking and moaning in pain.

"What am i saposed to do? I can't let her go, I can't. She actually took Twilight's place!

What if I had hurt her by mistake..I..I..Oh I can't even imagine it! i couldn't live with myself!

I would loose my sanity!"

You've already lost your sanity.

"Why must my hidious face, and sick chaos, always get in the way! All I want is her!

All I need is her! I must have her! I..I...I lo-"

Don't you even say it! You don't love her, you are just lost. Confused. You just think you

love her. She is nothing! You are the lord of chaos! Act like it! ACT LIKE IT!

Discord stared down at his hands, the hands that almost killed Fluttershy.

"No. No, I will not believe it. I will not believe that I am this, this monster!

You are the monster! You are not me! I don't know who or what you are, but you will

not control me! Your right, I am the Lord of Chaos! I make my own rules!

I don't follow the rules of someone that doesn't even exist!"

His continence laughed.

Step back a few steps, oh great lord of chaos. Remember, I am you! So keep telling

your self, that you don't exist. I am your thoughts Discord. you must be thinking them.

You must be really mad, or else, you couldn't even hear me.

Discord froze in realization. His continence was right, he has gone mad.


"Twilight?"

Twilight turned to see Applejack at the library door.

"Yes Applejack, come in."

Applejack walked in and sat down.

"Twilight. I'm in love with rainbowdash." Applejack confessed.

Twilight looked at her and smiled.

"I know."

"Wait what? You do?"

"Yes. I'm not stupid. Go talk to her."

Applejack swallowed down tears.

"I..I can't.."

"Why not?"

"Because she already knows."

Twilight then remembered the event that had occurred, started with Rainbow

kissing Fluttershy.

"Oh yeah, that's right."

"I don't know what to do Twilight. I mean, she likes Fluttershy, yet Fluttershy

still has thoughs odd feeling for,..for,..."

"Discord?"

"Yeah. Discord."

Applejack then teared up and wiped her eyes.

"I'm sorry Twilight. I don't mean to cry. It's just. Oh, i'v loved her

for so long, and, now it's all for nothing! I'd do anything for her.

I'd let her win for once, i'd use my rope to catch the clouds.

I'd pay all the gems in the world, just to help her keep her

wonderbolt title. I'd do anything!"

Applejack then busted into tears, falling down. Twilight knelt down

next to her, setting her hoof on the cowgirl's shoulder.

"Applejack. I couldn't tell you how to fix this. No matter how

powerful my magic is. It can't change someone's love for someone.

Just as it can't mend a broken heart. Though sometimes i wish it could."

Applejack hugged Twilight close, sobbing into her shoulders.

"Twilight. I'm not asking for magic, i'm asking for a friend."

"Then a friend you have." Twilight said with a smile.


A few weeks went by, and twilight got a letter saying they were all invited

to the grand galloping gala.

"PARTY!" Pinkie screamed as she heard the news.

"Alright, i'd be nice to have a nice ho-down." Applejack said.

"This will be Awesome! Wonderbolts are Preforming!" Rainbow fangirled.

"Rainbow." Said Applejack. "If you are a wonderbolt, why do you still fangirl?"

"Because! This time, i'm preforming with them!"

Everypony laughed and went home to prepare.


Discord stood in his cave, gazing upon Equestria. Planning his next attack.

"This is a bad idea."

No it's not. I have control of you now. Guess you shouldn't have fought back!

"I will not harm them again!"

Oh yes you will. In due time, you will!

"My Celestia protect you ponies.."

Hehe, yes. And have mercy on your soul.


"Hey Rainbow. i'm going to the Everfree Forest to see Zacora. Wanna come?"

Fluttershy asked rainbowdash. Rainbowdash smiled, and knotted.

"Heck yeah i'll come!"

So the two Pegasus adventured into the Everfree.

"What you going to Zacora for?"

"Advice."

"About what?"

"My future, destiny, ...love."

Rainbow rolled her eyes.

"Oh. Still Goo Goo Gaga Over Discord?"

Fluttershy shot her a glare.

"Dose it really matter if I do? Sorry if i don't like you back."

"I understand. I'll wait."

Fluttershy stopped and glared at rainbow dash.

"RainbowDash! I will never like you like that! I am sorry! Instead of waiting for somepony

that won't come to you. Find somepony that already has!"

Rainbow hung her head. She felt bad for what happened. She had no idea AppleJack liked her.

It hurt her to know what pain AJ was in.

"Yeah. Good point. Lets get to Zacora."

"Agreed."

The ponies wondered threw for a few moments, when suddenly shuffling came from the bushes.

They both froze and scanned the area.

"I don't see anything." Rainbow said hovering above the trees.

"Me either."

Rainbow floated down, and landed by Fluttershy.

"Keep a look out." Rainbow said, Fluttershy knotted and agreed.

You could still hear the shuffling in the bushes, and low howls.

Rainbow kept down and creeped around the bushes. Trying to find the noise.

Just as she went to turn back to fluttershy, and huge timber wolf opened it mouth.

Rainbow looked up, her head it the way of it's massive jaws. She screamed and darted into the sky.

Fluttershy heard her a began to fly up, but the timber wolf grabbed her tail. Fluttershy gave out

a squeal. Rainbow turned and zoomed down, slamming into the timber wolf.

"oh no! You can't have flutters!"

Rainbow wrestled the Timber wolf, desperately trying to keep away from the jaws.

Then as Rainbow turned to heck on flutter shy who was on the ground, watching in horror.

The timber wolf grabbed Rainbow with his jaws, teeth piercing into her leg, and threw

the poor Pegasus into a tree. Rainbow gave out a murderous scream as she hit the ground.

Blood spewed out her leg.

"Rainbow!" Fluttershy yelled, only to get the timber wolves attention directed toured her.

Rainbow the managed to throw a rock at it, to make it look at her.

"Your beef is with me!" Said the brave Pegasus.

The timber wolf, slowly walked back over to Rainbowdash. Her heart was racing. It was the end,

she just knew it was the end. Guilt then overcame her, she never got a chance to

apologize to AJ! She never got to say she...she..and with that, the timber wolf knocked her

across the ground. It was going to strike again, when something grabbed its arm.

Rainbow looked up to see what had saved her, and what she saw was...a rope!

With that apple jack tied the other end to a tree.

"Run!" Applejack screamed.

Fluttershy darted over to rainbow helping her up.

"But AJ what about you?" Rainbow asked.

"I'll be fine, just go."

Rainbow looked back as they were walking off, walking back at the heroic, courageous, beautiful mare

that had saved her life. With that she gave a smile, and turned her head away to continue walking

back to town.


Rarity was frantic. It was only a few days away from the grande galloping gala, and

she has yet to Finnish her and Applejack's dresses! She scrambled around the room,

back and forth, and back and forth. Grabbing and dropping things. Throwing things all around

the room. She was in a fashion panic. She had to Finnish, she just had to.

"Alright Rarity." She said. "You got this!"

Using her magic, she started sewing fabric together. It ad to be perfect.

Twilight then walked in with Rainbow, who was almost healed from the timber wolf attack.

Rarity turned with a big smile.

"Girls! Hello! Welcome!" rarity greeted.

"Hello to you to Mrs. Fashion Disaster." Rainbow joked.

"Well, i'm just running out of time is all, only a few days left! Must be perfect!"

Twilight laughed.

"Oh Rarity, calm down. Applejack is going to love it no matter what."

"Twilight." rarity said smiling. "You are so smart, but this is my profession,and It

must be perfect. Now I need privacy! Sew Shew! Love you but shew."

Twilight and Rainbow both laughed and left the dress shop.

"Tonight's the night!"

Twilight cheered, as she woke up the morning of the grande galloping gala.

She arose and looked about the window smiling.

"Nothing will ruin it this year. Not even Discord.


Be ready Discord. Tonight's the night.

"I know." Discord said, sounding hypnotized.

Nothing will stop you now. Not ever Twilight Sparkle.

"Yes...not even...twilight...sparkle..."

Laughter then echoed threw his eerie cave.
Here it is, it's been on fanfiction for a while though
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