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Guilty Chapter 8

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Guilty ch. 8



"Alright girls! Time to get ready!"

Rarity said as the girls all started to groom themselves.

Twilight stuck her head, sitting down, in the big hair dryer. Along

did AppleJack. Rainbowdash continued to go threw jewelry, trying to

find something,..COOL.

"Nope." said Rainbow. "Nope, nu uh, OH NO!"

Rarity huffed up at rainbow.

"Raibowdash sweaty, you'll never find something if you continue to

be picky!"

Rainbow threw down the jewelry.

"Well!" She complained. "It's just not cool enough! None of it is!"

"Well can't you deal with 50% cool?"

"Psh! No, it still needs to be 20% cooler! No, wait, add 30%!"

Rarity face-hoofed and continued to brush her hair.

"Oh whatever rainbowdash."

Fluttershy was combing out her long pink hair. It was soft and silky.

She looked at herself in the mirror.

"Well Rarity, what do you think?" Fluttershy asked.

Rarity looked her over.

"Let me get the curling iron."

Rarity got the curling iron and began fixing her hair.

Pinkie was putting on jewelry, to much jewelry.

"Pinkie.." Rainbow said. "Isn't that to much?"

"Psh no! Hold on let me Finnish!"

Pinkie zoomed behind the changing curtains and came out with balloons

taped to her.

"Ta-Da!"

Rarity dropped the curling iron and ripped the balloons off of pinkie.

"Oh pinkie! No no no!"

"What?"

"This is the grande galloping gala! You are not wearing that, put on your dress!

and take off some of that jewelry!"

Rarity then continued to curl Fluttershy's hair.


The girls all got into there carriage. Rainbow had talked Rarity into at least letting her

take off the dress during the wonder-bolts performance.

"So girls? Anyone wanna dance with me tonight?" Spike asked as they ignored him.

"Oh, why do I always get ignored. Heck, why am i always driving?"

Soon they arrived at the Gala. Twilight flew out and rushed inside.

"I have to greet the guests!" She said landing at the bottom of the stairwell.

The other five went inside. The ballroom was decorated in dark blue and purple.

Light blue and Purple lights covered the ceiling and walls. Twilight wore a

light purple dress that poofed back, and the corset sparkled. Her bangs brushed

a bit to the side and hair slightly curled. Rainbow was in a simple black dress,

her corset was rainbow. She has lightning blots pinning her hair back. Pinkie was

in a Pink poofy dress with balloon charms on her white corset. Rarity had a purple

and white dress. A white and purple dress poofed on her back and she has a corset

with purple jewels covering it. Her hair was curled up into a fancy hairdo.

Apple jack has a simple countrey disgn. With a brown corset and an apple on her

chest. Her hair was braided to the side and bangs curled. She obviously wore boots.

Finally Fluttershy wore a simple flowing green dress, the corset was dark green with

white flowers around the neck line. Her hair was curled back and clipped with a

green butterfly. Spike was wearing a tux.

Fluttershy sat in the back, staying away from the crowd. She stood gazing at the

floor. Rainbow mingled with the wonder-bolts, rarity went to fancy pants,

applejack set up her table, twilight greeted guests, and pinkie begged DJ pony,

to let her sing the pony pokie, or something fun. DJ was of course refusing.

"Please let me! Its a party!" Pinkie asked.

DJ Pony shook her head.

"PLEASE!"

Pinkie continued to bug her.

Meanwhile Rainbow was busy bugging Soran.

"Oh come on Soran that's your third pie." Rainbow joked.

Soran looked up from stuffing his face.

"I know." He said. "But i'm hungry."

"You're always hungry."

"So." Soran wiped his face and smiled. "So uh, wanna dance?"

Rainbow laughed.

"No thinks, to mushy."

"Wanna go out?"

Rainbow froze.

"S-soran dude. We're just friends. You know I like some-pony."

"Oh yeah sorry, well if you ever change your mind."

"Totally dude, i'll keep you in mind."


"So fancy pants." Said rarity making googly eyes at him. "want to dance?"

"Why certainly." He said.

They then went to dance. Applejack stood looking for Rainbow.

"Oh why am I even botherin'" She sighed. "She don't like me back."

She then saw Fluttershy alone in the back and walked over to her.

"Fluttershy! What are you doing? This is a party."

"I don't know." Fluttershy said. "I don't feel like dancing."

Applejack stood beside her in thought of rainbow.

"Yeah, me neither."

"Whats wrong applejack?"

"Oh nothin flutters, I'm just a bit heart broken."

Applejack held back her tears.

"About Rainbow?"

"yeah, about rainbow.."


Rainbowdash stood as Soran ate another pie.

"Oh geez, what am I doing wrong? Were is she?"

"Were is who?" Soran asked.

"Applejack."

Soran looked up at her.

"Applejack? I thought you liked Fluttershy."

"Fluttershy has feelings for Discord."

"So now you like Applejack?"

"Well yeah, hehe, she saved me and flutters from timber wolves."

"Awww, cute."

"Oh hush and stop being sappy!"

Rainbow then spotted Applejack with Fluttershy. Rainbow walked over to them.


"Its okay Applejack, i'm heart broken to." Fluttershy said.

"Yeah I know." Said applejack. "About Discord."

A song came on called Chasing Cars, by Snow Patrol.

We'll do it all. Everything. On our own.

Rainbow arrived. Applejack and Fluttershy looked up at her.

"Oh hey Rainbow." Applejack said.

We don't need. Anything, or anyone.

Rainbow smiled and took out her hoof.

"Wanna dance?" Rainbow asked.

If I lay here. If I just lay here.

"Y-yes." Applejack blushed as she took rainbows hoof.

Would you lie with me and just forget the world.

Rainbow took her to the dance floor and slowly swayed with her.

I don't quiet know. How to say, how I feel.

Rainbow looked up at Applejack, she wanted to say it but, the words

would not come out.

Those three words, are said to much, thy're not enough.

"Rainbow.." Applejack said breaking the silence.

Rainbow looked up at her with hopeful eyes.

If i lay here. If I just lay here. Would you lie with me and just forget the

world?

"I'm sorry for yelling at you and fluttershy back in Canterlot. You liked flutters,

and I should respect that." Apple jack said holding back tears.

Forget what we're told, before we get to old. Show me a garden that's bursting

into life.

"Applejack, i'm over fluttershy. I know now that she was never interested."

Rainbow said. "Lets get outta here."

Rainbow then grabbed Applejack flying into the air.

Lets waste time Chasing cars, around our heads..

She flew them outside and then laid in the garden under the stars giggling.

fireflies flew everywhere around them, like fairies.

"Rainbow, what? Why are we out here?" Apple jack asked.

I need your grace. To remind me, to find my own.

"Because I thought the stars matched you're eyes better."

A pink blush then grew across Applejack's face. They then eased into a kiss. There

lips touching with passion.

If I lay here. If I just lay here. Would you lie with me and just forget the world?

Forget what we're told! Before we get to old. Show me a garden that bursting into life!

Rainbow looked up from the kiss, gazing into Applejack's eyes. Applejack just could not

believe any of this. Rainbow smiled and laughed.

"what is it AJ?" She asked as Applejack's face beamed red.

All that I am. All that I ever was. Is here in your perfect eyes. They're all I can see.

"N-nothing. Just a but surprised." Applejack answered hiding her face to the side.

A fire fly then landed on her muzzle. She laid still, facing Rainbow.

Rainbow smiled, giggling at the sight.

I don't know where. Confused about how as well. Just know that these things will never

change for us at all.

Rainbow then eased in setting the muzzle to Applejack's. Letting the firefly sit on both of

them. With that Rainbow eased into another kiss.

If I lay here. If I just lay here. Would you lie with me and just forget the world?

The song ended and they drew from there kiss. Applejack smiled as the firefly flew away.

"Maybe we should go back inside?" Applejack asked.

Rainbow shook her head.

"I'd rather stay out here than watch Soran eat another pie."

They both then laughed and continued talking.


Alright Discord. it's time!

"Yes, it's time."

Discord hovered above the ballroom like a hypnotized ghost.

Lets crash the party.


"Good-evening." Twilight greeted the guests.

"Princess? Where in Equestria is the other princesses?" A pony asked.

"important business in Manehatten."

Discord took the form of a pony and walked up to twilight. Twilight greeted him, thinking nothing

of that being discord.

"Welcome." Twilight said.

Discord then grew a deep laugh.

"Idiot. It's me!"

Discord then turned into himself, Grabbing Twilight and flying into the ballroom onto the ceiling.

All the ponies gasped in horror.

"D-Discord!?" Fluttershy screamed. "wh-what are you!?"

Pinkie ran over to Fluttershy along with Rarity.

"What in heavens!?" Rarity asked gasping.

"The meanie is back!" pinkie screamed.

Fluttershy hid in the corner.

Rainbow's ears perked up as she heard the ponies scream.

"Somthings wrong!" Rainbow said as she drug Applejack inside.

They rushed over to the other girls.

"What in tarnation!" Applejack said

"Whats he doing here?" Rainbow asked.

Discord gave out a loud deep sadistic laugh.

"I'm here to rip out all you pathetic souls!" Discord yelled.

He then looked at Twilight.

"Starting with you."
aaaaand here is 8. I don't own the song chasing cars.
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i loved this make a nother chapter pleas i love this so much yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay